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A ROUND TUIT

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A ROUND TUIT

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                          	                                 .At long.
                                                         Last  we  have  suffi-
                                                     cient  supply  of  these   in-
                                                Valuable  items for  you  to  have
                                              one   of   your   very   own.  Guard it
                                            With   your   life.     These  tuits   have
                                          been   hard   to   come by,  especially the
                                         round   ones.    This   is   an   indispensable
                                        item.     It     will    help  you  to   become a
                                        more    efficient   worker.          How   many
                                        Times   have   you   had   to   say,   “I’ll  do
                                           it   as    soon   as   I   get   a   round   tuit”?
                                            Now   that   you   have   a   round   tuit
                                              of   your   very   own,  many    things
                                                  needing   to   be   done  will   get
                                                             done properly>
                                                                                                                       

                                        
              

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:21:00 AM
    An outstanding write... Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Very clever concrete poem. Congratulations on your win. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Ralph,, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Many congrats my dear friend Ralph! This is indeed great and amazing inspirational poem ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Ralph, a sweet win~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 7:02:00 PM
    hahaha. Good one, Ralph. Your formatting complements your "tuit' well. Big applause for your top placement in Andrea's "fave poem" contest. Well done, my friend :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 11:43:00 PM
    I will use this round tuit for various ball games! LOL! ~JS Lambert

  1. Date: 7/10/2010 12:54:00 PM
    Such a creative poem with an artistic presentation. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 9:11:00 PM
    oh, yes you are the ceative round to it guy. I wanted to tell you, don't be fooled by my haiku. I too am a rhyming poet. I only do haiku when they have those picture contests. I am not really writing haiku either. but I understand how haiku are supposed to be. Most people here are not doing them right, including myself. I call them "short 3-line descriptive free verse poems with limited syllable count" haha. Anyway, you should try it sometime. They do the traditional syllable count here 5/7/5!!

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 6:37:00 PM
    This is Good Ralph.....Looks like my MIL's nose.....Larry

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 4:21:00 PM
    this is GENIUS. If you don't place VERY high with this, someone is just not thinking!! LUv, andrea ps this is what I call thinking outside the box and INSIDE the circle. A fav!

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 4:25:00 AM
    SOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!, you must have met my husband haha

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 8:12:00 PM
    Very nice and humorous. Good luck in contest. Thank you for your comments on "My Peaceful Moments" Joyce

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 7:56:00 PM
    Nice shape, well done, mine is a tree, it is called The Tree of Life.. I am sending soup mail.. constance

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 5:46:00 PM
    love the shape, round tuit--witty. done properly!!