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Stealcian

I do not underestimate you.
My naive nature has shielded my fear...
Turn around.

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  1. Date: 5/15/2010 7:20:00 PM

    I agree with Chris. It's nice to see a senryu that has the quality of the form without adhering to rigid syllable counts. Nice work, Maggie. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 6:05:00 PM

    Intriguing Senryu here. I like the free syllable count. Chris.