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DISTANCE

              DISTANCE

Walking towards the light 
Leaving behind a wink of the night

Ignoring the massive things between
Exploding with all the things I've seen

Reality to dreams, it may be
Blinded by the ways of me

Without knowing my deception
Painting myself with a bad description

About me, I have no reason to lie
Some things should never be asked why?

A sickening motion due to gravity
When life decays turn into a cavity

Life will soon find a solution 
Ahead of myself like a resolution

Developing the pictures of all time
Predicting a way out of a single crime

I sit and listen to all incoming observations
While my mind is lost in its own rotation

Losing myself in a severe way
I hate the way I wake up everyday.

          
S.K.A.T. 

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  1. Date: 3/2/2014 11:13:00 AM

    SKAT Such powerful and deep words. The intensity in your words are right from your heart and it shows. Nice job Thanks once again for the birthday wishes and comment on my poem.

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 10:48:00 PM

    Good am my dearest sis Skat! So glad & an honor for me to visit u today & one of your stellar poems. So glad I found this one. You did an excellent job on this couplets my dearest sis & friend. Perfect and so amazing in every way. I extremely love how honesty is creatively expressed. As a sayng goes, honesty is the best policy. We're just human but we're greatly love esp. by Him. It's in honesty that we're more accepted and loved. Loving & hugging this stellar couplet & U. TYSM! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 1:04:00 PM

    Hi Skat - thank you for the comment on one of my poems. I thought to walk into your world a bit and read many of yours....very nice and I really liked this one! Z

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:13:00 PM

    Very impressive... Good work... You talked about naming a particular poem, on my list. How can we go about it.. Welcome back from the break.. Hope to see your new stuffs ~A.O

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 5:14:00 PM

    Thanks Irma, hope your night is an ease.(: and hows life lately.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 11:25:00 AM

    loved the rhyme and the thought and the idea, isn't there a distance in every emotion, day, relationship which grows with very passing day? thank you for your lovely words on my poem..while you are alive.

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 4:46:00 AM

    Hi SKAT, thank you for your ongoing kind comments and have a great day...Gert

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 7:41:00 AM

    I like the way you focus and the way it flows.

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 2:23:00 PM

    I really liked the rhyme to this poem. Love, Susan

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 11:51:00 AM

    Good rhyming and great flow...It conveys a sense of confusion.It's deep and beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 12:27:00 AM

    awesome poem i enjoyed reading it a lot!!! :)

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 4:51:00 PM

    VERY VERY NICE... I C EYE 2 EYE WITH YOU. THERE'S A WAR WITHIN THAT BY FAR IS MORE SERIOUS & IMPORTANT THAN THE IRAQ WAR NOR THE FIGHT AGAINST TERRORIST NOR ANY OTHER WORDLY WAR. THANKX 4 SHARING

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 10:10:00 PM

    Smashing poem, we all have those sorts of days. Thank you so much for commenting on my poetry. Haven't figured out how to reply back to peoples comments yet.

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 5:03:00 AM

    Brilliant poem, I can't describe it in any other way.

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 5:43:00 PM

    Great flow, Irma. I enjoyed. And I think your contest is getting some great results!!! You were brave to do two in a row like you did. I need to get on the ball and do another one too. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 5:16:00 AM

    awesome rhyming Irma, enjoyed it!!- regards Wilma

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:28:00 AM

    NICE...I LIKE THIS POEM...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:12:00 AM

    NICE RYHMS NICE VERSES NICE ACTS LOVED IT

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 5:42:00 AM

    Awesome write, Irma, nice rhymes!..Keep on writing...And thank you for your comments....Gert

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 10:05:00 PM

    well the rhyming, awesome:), i love it , of course lol, your writes are pretty cool:), clever ending, love Royal<3

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 12:59:00 PM

    I sit and listen to all incoming observation..while my mind is lost in its own rotation.. OMG BBF Irma this is a magnificent line and the entire poem is awesome .. if I am the "Sweetheart" of P.S. u are definitely the "Darling" sweetie.. good luck and congrats on your first contest .. am leaving tomorrow for two weeks but have submitted an entry ..hope u like.. it was so fun and cool to write.. to support u... enjoy this new feature and will be on my laptop so will be in touch..luv.. to u..

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 11:32:00 AM

    Irma, great rhymes and lots to ponder about in this one. I will check out your first contest now. Runaway Train....I will have to keep this one clean ;D. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 3:08:00 PM

    this is very honest and expressed in a most interesting way - I love it. hope for tomorrow, we all must have it - and I can sense it in between your words. wonderful to read you again and thank you so kindly for your thoughtful comment. love, shar

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 2:31:00 PM

    THANK'S 4 UR Comments, you have some deep poetry keep up the writes.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 1:51:00 PM

    Hey, Irma! You be going around in circles "Mind is lost in its own rotation" I like it. I have many of these times myself. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 1:22:00 PM

    Some people say they are living the dream...I tend to believe we have to dream to live. Nicely done, especially about why should a person be asked if they're lying. Thanks for your comments on my work. Dan C

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 11:53:00 AM

    Nice piece of writes you have wrote there, and thanx for your comments on my poetry

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 8:23:00 AM

    all mends come to and end,..p.d. (chat)

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 4:57:00 AM

    I sometimes rescue myself into dreams and when I'm having a nice one---I usually wake up. Awesome write, Irma! Thank you for your well wishing and comments and have yourself a nice Sunday...Gert

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 4:54:00 AM

    Terrific poetry SKAT, a joy to read this Sunday >> James

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