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spring waters

DEW gathered on grass-
              a fawn woke from the brambles
to quench her thirst

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  1. Date: 7/10/2010 12:43:00 PM

    You paint a peaceful scene with your words in this one. You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 9:33:00 AM

    such a refreshing haiku, Tara! It's pretty vivid too, enjoyed reading this & thank you so much on your wonderful comments in my sestina :)