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Sacred Secrets

Strong and pure to stand the ages
emanating from inside this trunk
I feel an ethereal hue,
beneath my palms I run.

Emanating from inside this trunk
are sacred secrets trapped in sap and pine,
beneath my palms I run
and hear the whispers of wood nymphs.

Are sacred secrets trapped in sap and pine?
I feel an ethereal hue
and hear the whispers of wood nymphs,
strong and pure to stand the ages.

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  1. Date: 5/14/2010 10:31:00 PM

    Best wishes if you are entering this excellent poem in the Pantoum contest. I really enjoy the imagery, and the ending closes off smootly. Well written.

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 10:28:00 PM

    Nicely done, Tara! Good luck in the contest! Ruben.