Summer Grass by Jeralynn Clark


Nick Bagnall Date: 6/18/2010 5:45:00 AM Oh - that's nice ! the willowy waving is just right for long grass Well done
Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/22/2010 5:39:00 PM nice! perhaps ..jade carpet? instead of green twice? And I'm with andrea great last line!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/21/2010 9:10:00 AM Love that last line, it is so summery! congratulations. Andrea
Date: 5/18/2010 8:14:00 PM Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Charles's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/18/2010 12:42:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Jeralynn. Love, Carol
Chris D. Aechtner Date: 5/18/2010 9:41:00 AM Jeralynn, congratulations on this textured, excellent Haiku! Chris.
Jimmy Anderson Date: 5/18/2010 9:08:00 AM Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice...Jimmy
Amy Green Date: 5/18/2010 8:19:00 AM Feeling this one, the lazy days of summer. Enjoyed.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 5/18/2010 7:58:00 AM Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome poem... enjoy another great win..luv.. Linda-Marie
Charles Henderson Date: 5/17/2010 11:59:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome 10th place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles
Jimmy Anderson Date: 5/15/2010 3:36:00 PM Very nice Haiku, Jeralyn...good luck in the contest.....Later, Jimmy
Rick Parise Date: 5/15/2010 9:34:00 AM Very nice~enjoy the last line~~Rick
Ruben O. Date: 5/14/2010 11:08:00 PM Awesome! Splendid Haiku, Jeralynn! Good luck in Charles' Contest. A winner in my list! Ruben.
Date: 5/14/2010 4:02:00 PM Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative perspective. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/14/2010 3:12:00 PM This is a beautifully written haiku, Jeralynn. I love the thought of the green grass "waving lazily" in the summer breeze. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn

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