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5/7/5 HAIKU with a KIGO

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5/7/5 HAIKU with a KIGO

ICED, admonition …
                             Cut with colon dash elipsis,

                                                                          no rhymes are served up!

For Haiku contest

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  1. Date: 5/14/2010 4:06:00 PM
    You have me chuckling. I think you addressed the rules. Fun poem. Good luck in the contest. Karen

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 11:23:00 AM
    Errrr, so the Kigo is the word, 'ellipse?" Just kidding. Very intriguing Haiku for sure. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
    Hilarious take on Charles contest, John. Good luck! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 10:17:00 AM
    well done John, enjoyed your haiku, have a nice Friday,..p..d