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Un-aware

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Un-aware

perfect
but not
with long hair and killer looks
you take the stage and play like you know how..
while few watch with lust-full eyes and others adore
you move slowly wondering where and why
not wanting the attention but have it anyways...
young bliss full youth
....
un perfect
with short dull hair and boring looks
you take the floor with no stares
you shout and you scream but no one sees
you want it soo bad
so badly you want to be seen
but they cant hear you, cant see you
young ignored youth
in a shallow world of the cruel

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  1. Date: 5/12/2010 4:35:00 PM

    this is nice in the form, you speak the truth, from to point of views well Jessica,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 4:33:00 PM

    WOW, I LIKED HOW YOU PERSPECULATED THESE TWO TOP AND BOTTOM, ENJOYED