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  1. Date: 5/20/2010 3:58:00 PM
    This is very nice, Buffy. I like that "never does he avoid it" LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 9:58:00 AM
    Great write emotive write that you have penned in this one...I like the line for I can be a clown sometimes...For I can be a clown sometimes...I also have dry wit that many do not understand...Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:26:00 AM
    Many of us have masks we use to cover our true feelings at times, Buffy. I read Sara's poem and I think it was the perfect source of inspiration for your wonderful poem. Hope you have told Sara about this -- she'll want to read it! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:47:00 PM
    this is different buffy. . its beautiful actually. . im glad that you let us see this side. a great write. hope to see more from you. don't hold those clear crystals in. its okey to cry at times. you have something quite unique about yourself you know. . its interesting how it shows through you.Caesar is such a sweet man. -Always&Forever Lynette