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icey clown cover !!inspired by a poet!!

listen..

sometimes i cry
my tears are like
clear crystals
that ive held in for
times on end
falling onto the velvet ice
created with happy faces
and a clowns nose.
for i can be a clown sometimes.
but other times thats just my 
icey clown cover.
for MiLeY's rainbow of smiles..
for CeAsAr's deep sea of blue eyes..
but forever will he see thru it.
and the amazing thing is,
never does he avoid it.
this is another side to me..

dont be confused..

bUfFy FoOkSss

!! inspired by sara kendrick !!

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  1. Date: 5/20/2010 3:58:00 PM

    This is very nice, Buffy. I like that "never does he avoid it" LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 9:58:00 AM

    Great write emotive write that you have penned in this one...I like the line for I can be a clown sometimes...For I can be a clown sometimes...I also have dry wit that many do not understand...Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:26:00 AM

    Many of us have masks we use to cover our true feelings at times, Buffy. I read Sara's poem and I think it was the perfect source of inspiration for your wonderful poem. Hope you have told Sara about this -- she'll want to read it! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:47:00 PM

    this is different buffy. . its beautiful actually. . im glad that you let us see this side. a great write. hope to see more from you. don't hold those clear crystals in. its okey to cry at times. you have something quite unique about yourself you know. . its interesting how it shows through you.Caesar is such a sweet man. -Always&Forever Lynette