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As I hid

As I hid behind the darkness of springs cool night; there she stood, dreaming

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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 11/2/2010 6:22:00 AM
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    This is a jewel you got here James, glad I came across it.. oh yeah I dropped you soupmail as well :) love Wilma

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/15/2010 8:11:00 AM
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    REviewing my fav poems today and saw this gem again! Hi there. have a great weekend!!
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    Joseph Spence Sr
    Date: 7/2/2010 4:47:00 PM
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    This is an excellent piece. I hope it's not a Goddess you're observing. This would be much worse than the muzzle of a Winchester. Hahahahah! You go dude! Great job! Joseph

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    sharon weimer
    Date: 6/2/2010 4:56:00 PM
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    well wow is right! this makes ones imagination soar! well done indeed. James, thank you so much for all those wonderful comments you thoughtful, kind man. what a delightful treat and I assure you it is more appreciated than I can express. thank you thank you!!! : )) xoxo
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 5/21/2010 10:36:00 AM
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    WOW! What a great Monoku, James!! The ending is amazing. It's going to my favs. Ruben.
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    James Fraser
    Date: 5/15/2010 8:45:00 AM
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    James, i just love how your words always leave the reader to finish of your poetry by picturing them > another gem >> James
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    Kim Hilliker
    Date: 5/15/2010 6:27:00 AM
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    Simply beautiful!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 5/12/2010 6:56:00 PM
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    Thankxxx for your many wonderful and uplifting comments today James.. u have inspired and I too am an impatient lady .. but the contests are quite addictive and so I feel the need to create to enter them.. challenging myself I guess... luv to u and Noah... from the "Sweetheart"
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 5/12/2010 6:11:00 PM
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    been on both sides of this lens....well penned! JP!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 5/12/2010 5:17:00 PM
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    Great short write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/12/2010 3:41:00 PM
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    This is really awesome, JAmes!! A fav!
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 5/11/2010 6:29:00 AM
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    beautiful monoku James. Charma
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 5/10/2010 6:11:00 PM
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    I enjoyed the images
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 5/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
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    Oh, I can picture it..nice one. BG
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 5/10/2010 5:03:00 PM
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    love it! JP!!!! ROCK-ON! BROTHER!!! jimbo
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 5/10/2010 4:19:00 PM
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    The image of this girl comes through so clearly, James. Keep watching out for her! Love, Carolyn
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 5/10/2010 4:12:00 PM
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    nice one
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    Rick Parise
    Date: 5/10/2010 3:52:00 PM
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    very nice ~ a treat for the imagination ! Nice dream~you've got me thinking of her~Thanks~Rick


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