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  1. Date: 6/13/2010 6:03:00 PM
    hello Lynette, yes they did work fast. i was surpised. i only wrote them the letter because i was told by peeps that know me where i live and know i post at the soup. the view my poems all the time. they are not members or poets. but are really intrested in the way i think. thanks for dropping a line,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 10:02:00 PM
    Hi Lynette--you sure have a lot of wisdom for a high school girl---yet another write of yours that wowed me--really liked the tone that you set in this poem too--:) btw really glad you liked my math story--yeah, that's what so funny, never in my wildest dreams did I think that there was a tear in his pants! I'm sure you are going to have much even funnier stories in college! --nikko :)

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 9:17:00 PM
    A good write but a very sad story...thanks on You can..Danny

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 8:37:00 PM
    Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:55:00 AM
    Lynette this is beautiful and I was breathless reading it .. so sensitive and tender ..good luck in the new contest as u should enter it in the Breathtaking Love one posted ... awesome write dear girl... enjoyed and thankxxx for your perky comments on my shape poem.. an artist I am not but I tried to make it fun.. and squares were faily easy with words... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 10:12:00 PM
    THIS IS...DEEP.YOU SEE THINGS OTHERS CAN'T IT SEEMZ.I DON'T RELLY UNDERSTAN THIS, DATS Y I SAY THAT. bUfFy

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 6:00:00 AM
    I am just here to wish you fun today my friend, i will s.m. you later. Have fun and do tell me more about your spirit mother when you have time. It is a very touching story,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 5:16:00 AM
    Interesting write from the perspective of a mother watching her daughter die and a daughter watching her mother die. It was hard being there when my mother died for she had cared for me from the time I was eighteen months old when they adopted me...She had even cared for me before that when she had seen me but I was not hers...She died peacefully over several days just slowly went away at age ninety-six and eleven months...Sara

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 4:31:00 AM
    I can see alot of feelings in this one. Its a good work. Well Done

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 5:51:00 PM
    good writing, well done

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 5:19:00 PM
    Intresting write! I guess you are an old soul. Thanks you for your kind words.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 1:07:00 PM
    It is clear that you do have an "old soul," Lynette, and that your mother and you shared a very special connection. This is so deep and meaningful. Breathtaking, really. Amazing how your spirituality always surfaces so gently and naturally in your poetry. Love and admiration, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 12:06:00 PM
    Lynette this is so touching, i can feel the life die in you. when and if your mother passed, you might want to explain to me a little more of your sad, story, and I myself am very impressed with you my friend, enjoyed, this lovely write of yours,... also thanks for the comments, meant much on my end,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 11:19:00 AM
    SUCH BEAUTY SPOKEN HERE LYNETTE, I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT TO PUT SUCH VERY WELL AND BEAUTIFUL WRITES TOGETHER BUT WOW I AM FOREVER A FAN, I LOVE THIS ONE, AND BEST WISHES ON THE CONTEST