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4 x 4

4 x 4

There you are driving ahead of me again
 five foot five in your four by four.
Peroxide blonde transporter of empty baby seats
Mobile phone to your ear transmitting
More nonsensical extrusion from a shallow mind

Roundabout ahead, wrong lane, who cares!
Let’s double park at the corner shop
Check the rearview mirror, yes makeup ok
Don’t forget the hazard lights of excused abandonment
Like a disco roadblock

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  1. Date: 11/14/2010 7:02:00 AM
    Gritty, I like the second to the last line. You're new here, welcome. raskin

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 10:42:00 AM
    Ha ha! That is so great. The last line, ending with, 'Like a disco roadblock,' sums up the whole piece very well. Enjoyed. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/4/2010 3:09:00 PM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Gerry. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2010 12:44:00 PM
    Gerry - so perfectly summed up. Welcome to the soup. I wish you success with your endeavours. Rgds Janette