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Another Kiss

Twas a feeling, much more
Than I dared to own.

She saw it in my eyes
And wished in half-breath signs
To speak but did not.

As I bit my lip and restrained my scream,
Sweat painted our bodies and soaked her mane.

Yet still I desired another kiss
As sweet as honey or peppermint.

Despite those urgent hips that thrust
Against me.
I long for what I have just mentioned.

Those hungry lips I wish to kiss
As sweet as honey or peppermint.

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  1. Date: 11/14/2010 3:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your work going into the second round..Sara

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 12:11:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Carlus. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:33:00 PM

    Carlus, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 11:58:00 AM

    Carlus, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 3:12:00 PM

    This is nice, Congratz on being featured

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 11:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Carlus. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 11:43:00 AM

    Avery nice and sweet poem Carlus, enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your poem being one of the many poems featured of this week. Have your self a wonderful & safe 4th of july,..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 11:11:00 AM

    Congrats on having your lovely poem featured on the Poetry Soup Homepage this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. keep your pen flowing with passion! Love, Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 9:16:00 PM

    congrats on this passionate piece being featured this week, enjoyed it immensely

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 4:28:00 PM

    I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 4:24:00 PM

    Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 3:23:00 AM

    Passionate write, enjoyed it.. Congrats on featuring this week as well tc Wilma

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 9:41:00 PM

    This is a good poem thanks for writing and sharing it. Congratulations on being featured. Rhonda Hero

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 11:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Carlus. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 7:13:00 AM

    Yes! No one seems to get enough of a good thing. Congrats on this selection. Love,daver

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 11:01:00 AM

    Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 4:07:00 PM

    Passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara