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in the end theres always something pointless holding us back............

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in the end theres always something pointless holding us back............

in the end theres always something pointless holding us back from discovering what we
could become or what we will become or who we can become or when we will become it or even
if it becomes us or maybe just maybe everyone becomes someone else but trapped in a
different reality one which we cannot see them but they can see us like a two way mirror thats
trapped in infinity but which in another time and place could become something that
encompasses all that we say and do and all that every other soul on the planets say and do
but it will not restrict our actions because freedoms are more important than being free
but i digress somewhat because in the end theres always something pointless holding us
back..............

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  1. Date: 4/30/2010 9:31:00 PM
    Brooding, dark thoughts. I hope that you snap out of it....unless of course this is a place that you find somehow soothing? Chris.

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 9:13:00 PM
    I get your point. :-) Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 8:29:00 PM
    A fine narrative