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Spider.

spider waiting hard
cobweb under 
white cherry
humble-bee brakes 
it throuh.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2010 12:31:00 AM

    the patience of a spider is something, but when they finally do see a chance they make no mistake, imagine as a meal depending on others to slip, thats something huh? enjoy your day.:)

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 6:12:00 AM

    A nice senryu with apt images

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 3:16:00 AM

    well done nice read,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 3:06:00 AM

    Great nature write...The bee was lucky though...Mostly they get trapped and don't break through...Sara