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..:A Forgotten Fragment Enigma:..~First Half of it~

She was Younger in Age then, during the Rise of thirteen.
In Deeper ways, it Only Felt of a number.
There was a certain Time where those Thoughts 
Began to be of Existence in Her Mind,
And with that, Her Wise Storyteller of a Grandmother
Would Never Cease to Speak of a Quote from the 
Countless others She had kept, 
Which Her Granddaughter would Tell 
She was a Legend for.
She would also Speak of this with Her Daughter. .
Known as Her Granddaughters Late Mother,
“The age of the body and physical mind is of matter,
But the age of the soul and spiritual mind overpowers
Through one’s wisdom.”
And yet, it is always a Wonder that will Dwell
In the Distance of those who Discontent themselves
From Considering Passed the Thought. .
Her Birthday was Held Near the End of these 
Treasured & Blissful Months,
The first Portable Cell phones by Motorola were 
Present merely five Years ago,
She was Aware of them, though it Never appeared 
As Wishful Thinking of owning one.
Even so, Her Father in particular had bought Her this,
Once He Drove a Visit to the Sunsets,
Along with an Irreplaceable Gift that
He Sought out in the Thought of  
His Little Girl on Her Special Day.
She carried it with Her, the Following Day,
While in a class She resides with a 
Friend who had a thing for Her.
He Wondered if She would Tell Him about
Her Cellular device.
In some Small way He Knew of Her Daily Happenings,
Although He may not have been the Only one. .
Others Grew up with Her each Day. .
Many Knew of Her & Her Childhood Friend.
There was an Essence in Their Presence,
They were more than their Physical Being.
They Held Far more in Common than the Deep Stars
In this Universe.
The Sensation of their Divinity 
Felt much in Secrecy.
Her Friend in whom She shared this 
Class with Enjoyed
Being even a Friend to Her, 
His Comical Tales Amused Her, 
He Knew it was of True Laughter
And not Only out of Her own Kindness.
He Grew Determined to Form a Smile Upon Her Face,
By the End of the Day, She Wrote Her Number 
In the Thoughts of His,
For She had Sensed He recently Deemed on it,
Though He was too Edgy to Question Her.
He would Wish Her a Good Night in Further Hours.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 9:55:00 PM

    THATS PEACEFUL. . bUfFy

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 10:58:00 AM

    Well here Iam back again as promised, This part is very interesting. Per your comment, I thank there might be a few others on soup that share your thoughts concerning my poetry. Smile! Especially when I enter them in a contest.Lol. Seeing how most of the time they end up down on the bottom place, or not at all.Lol. Well anyway I do appreciate the people, such as yourself, who do take the time to read and understand them. I will now go to your next part. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:39:00 AM

    Read this wonderful story already just here to wish you a wonderful Sunday,,Irma

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 6:36:00 PM

    Is this you and your boyfriend, sweetie .You have such an unusual way of telling your story, but I believe it is about you. Enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 5:04:00 PM

    Good advice from the grandmother about being wise...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 5:56:00 AM

    Lynette, I receive your comment of gracefulness with much appreciation today. I see here you have a two part narrative that looks very interesting. I have a trip today that I was just about to leave on. So, I will return tomorrow, and read both parts. Then I can do justice to what appears to be a magnificient write, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:24:00 PM

    Bummer I should have read the first half first a very good read, a story about a dream are you the girl in the story, maybe not you a very bright teen ..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 5:27:00 PM

    A nice write now I have to go and enjoy part 2,,Irma