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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 9:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 10:58:00 AM
    Well here Iam back again as promised, This part is very interesting. Per your comment, I thank there might be a few others on soup that share your thoughts concerning my poetry. Smile! Especially when I enter them in a contest.Lol. Seeing how most of the time they end up down on the bottom place, or not at all.Lol. Well anyway I do appreciate the people, such as yourself, who do take the time to read and understand them. I will now go to your next part. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:39:00 AM
    Read this wonderful story already just here to wish you a wonderful Sunday,,Irma

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 6:36:00 PM
    Is this you and your boyfriend, sweetie .You have such an unusual way of telling your story, but I believe it is about you. Enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 5:04:00 PM
    Good advice from the grandmother about being wise...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 5:56:00 AM
    Lynette, I receive your comment of gracefulness with much appreciation today. I see here you have a two part narrative that looks very interesting. I have a trip today that I was just about to leave on. So, I will return tomorrow, and read both parts. Then I can do justice to what appears to be a magnificient write, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:24:00 PM
    Bummer I should have read the first half first a very good read, a story about a dream are you the girl in the story, maybe not you a very bright teen ..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 5:27:00 PM
    A nice write now I have to go and enjoy part 2,,Irma