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  1. Date: 4/21/2010 1:23:00 PM
    I agree with the other comments - the formatting here does strike the reader, both in the obvious way that one would expect it to, but somehow subconsciously as well, I'd say. The piece as a whole is heart (or perhaps soul) tugging.... it's sort of quietly potent, really. Well done.

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 7:54:00 AM
    I wish you a day of love, sunshine and inspiration beyond your wildest dreams Peter. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 3:37:00 PM
    Wow..this is definitley going to my favs..i love the format,it compliments the poem,,its like a tunnel of searching one self..Iits like the world decreasing in verses..I love the first verse too,"chalk leaves, a trail across the pavement..."Outstanding..Keep posting..talented indeed..If you have time ,read Ruben Ortellao.. i see similarities in your work...He s talented too..excellent Pete r..:) Charma

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 3:26:00 PM
    Intriguing write here. I really like how your 'decreasing world' poem actually decreases in size with each line....but you obviously already know that lol ;D Chris.