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Stubborn or Silence;

..                                      You Say you Hate this;
                                  Why must you be a Fool Love;
                                          Our Silence Stays;

                                          I Remain the same;
                                    I won't do what I don't Wish;
                                        So why do you Change;

                                       We're Stronger than that;
                                  I have brought Pain to my Heart;
                                       From your Stubborn Ways;

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  1. Date: 5/14/2010 5:31:00 PM

    wow you have a lot of comments, you do so well, just stoping by to see if you had any thing new, have yourself a blast today Lynette,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 1:23:00 AM

    I like your poem. Thats how sometimes I feel about someone special in my life, totally know where you are coming from. Its weird how I can relate more to strange people like you than my own friends and family.

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 10:02:00 PM

    DIS KEWLY bUfFy

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 8:06:00 PM

    On "Skunk"..nice try, but try again...you give a dog a shot to prevent it from getting rabbies??? When it gets rabiess....you put it down..Danny

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 2:10:00 PM

    yep, have to be careful with us stubborn folk. can be hard to deal with.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 4:56:00 AM

    Another excellent write! love Simone

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:36:00 PM

    My Dear Sister Spirit, Lynn, the second stanza is the croix of this Beautiful Write You remain the same (through the ages) as YOUR Spirit is Pure YOU already know the results of what YOU do or Don't do Why do they change : They let their Spirits Die This is the most Magnificent POEM I have read Into my Favorites Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Brother...Harry

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:59:00 AM

    Expressive are we,(Baby boy). I am in my comment box, thanks L.(Baby boy)

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 6:24:00 PM

    Deep thoughts here Lynette...Goes to my favs...Thanks for reading mine...You are really good!! Love, audrey

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 10:29:00 PM

    when aren't they stubborn and confusing , loved your write:)

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 7:52:00 PM

    interesting write..a nice comment was left for me? on my sonnet Star Struck..perhaps you meant it for John? Light & love

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 7:09:00 PM

    Heartfelt poem. Gives the reader with thoughts to ponder. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 6:00:00 AM

    This one kind of sounds like me in a lot of ways, good write...thanks on 5Y....write a book, you must of read my mind as that is what are in my plans.thanks..Danny

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 3:51:00 PM

    depends on what your talking about. john

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 5:47:00 PM

    You are quiet the person . I know with all your wonderful comments to everyone. You are to smart to put yourself in pains way. I do read your comments you know, still you have your self nice haiku here take care..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 7:50:00 AM

    Good write..thanks on Voodoo...yes is is "sort of evil"...Danny

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 12:17:00 PM

    Hey again, I would soupmail ya, but mail is not working. About my "mystery" poem, I will tell you where it came from. It's from a dream I had, very vivid dream I got after watching Carrie, back in the 70's!! However, I wrote the dream in 2000. What I could remember of it. It has an ending. But I couldn't reveal it because of the contest! Yes, I had gotten electrocuted down my whole arm. It was scary and I'm glad I got my arm away from it! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 11:01:00 PM

    HI, Lynette. thanks for reading my two "flower" poems today. I'd say you are a quite the delightful regular here at the Soup. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 3:08:00 AM

    Hey,you are getting onto those syllable counts. Good job, Lynette! How are you doing lately? Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 12:26:00 AM

    I enjoyed the poem

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 8:10:00 PM

    Back on this one, I always say read it more than twice if you like. That is all they know how to do is put pain in our hearts. Enjoyed thanks for your comment.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 5:25:00 PM

    kick him to the curb!! don't waste time on a jerk. enjoyed reading.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 1:55:00 PM

    Great. The capitalization stands out to me, I like it. I was in your shoes very recently actually, and the last stanza really hit me. Awesome piece though!

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 1:31:00 PM

    Wow, Lynette, you could have written this about someone I know all too well -- stubborn, silent and unyeilding. I have put this pain behind me and hope you can do the same. With your permission, I'd like to share this poem with a friend who doesn't frequent Poetry Soup. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 1:17:00 PM

    Love is a strange thing for we can fall for someone that when we get off and look at the situation we could not possibily want to be involved with that person...Creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write about the brain sucker..I am glad that you found it funny...I was hoping that it would make someone's day..Sara

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 12:03:00 PM

    Awesome haiku write, well done