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A Star for Dane Ann

Stars are but pores in the seams of heaven
From which loved ones smile down on us
Showing us they are happy, at peace

For you, dear Dane Ann, I buy a special star
The radiance of a beautiful soul
Who walked this Earth with joy and love

I give to you the star “Jeanette”
A woman like you who lit a spiritual path
And gave comfort and friendship willingly

Her star will cast blessings on your home
The light will lead you through dark times
A steadfast ray of hope and inspiration

This is what Jeanette gave to me
In memory I choose to share her brilliance
To guide you on your journey through life


*Entry for PD's contest

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 6:53:00 PM

    Good one honoring Dane Ann..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 2:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Beautiful piece. Great job, my friend. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Best to you and yours. luv and hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:28:00 AM

    Carolyn congrats on your win ..David

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:15:00 AM

    CAROLYN, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:14:00 AM

    CAROLYN, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 2:25:00 PM

    Lovely tribute to Dane Anne and Jeanette, my friend : ) I finally got round to posting a poem tonight. Have a great evening x

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 3:52:00 AM

    Nicely written poem, Carolyn! Didn' t hear from Dane Ann lately and hope she is well. She must have loved your write! Thank you for your kind comments...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 3:45:00 PM

    No wonder why this is one of the winners! Great write, great tribute, great friend! Congratulations, Carolyn! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 9:36:00 PM

    what a wonderful way to say it and I bet Dane ann loved it. Congratulations. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 1:29:00 AM

    Congratulations Carolyn, on your win with this beautiful heartfelt poem. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 12:14:00 PM

    Awesome poetry Carolyn...believe it or not, I have two sisters named Jeanette ! Yep ! Anywho, one of the souls on the soup is sponsering a contest on, buying and naming a star for some one special...I can't remember who though, this would be awesome Carolyn ! james

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 2:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest Carolyn. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 1:35:00 PM

    Beautiful poem for Dane Ann Carolyn, well done in the contest >> James

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 1:00:00 PM

    An awesome poem Carolyn. A worthy consideration for the winning circle. Enjoy, agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 4:43:00 PM

    Congrats, my dear friend. I knew it was going to be a winner :) Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 4:34:00 PM

    Congrats Carolyn on your success in my "Shining Star" contest... excellent tribute write to a special lady and thankxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 4:18:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carolyn. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 3:17:00 PM

    a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to a wonderful lady for sure written by a special and wrm lady as well,,,Thank You again and Ciongratulations on all your wins that I have missed here,,and again for your reads and comments left behind upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 2:35:00 PM

    I'm afraid that I made everything up in "On Emigrating To Iceland After Iraq." But then I often do that in the first draft and then the challenge is to make the poem work even if it is the spawn of the imagination. I spent most of my life as an editor of factual prose. Poetry offers me the chance to say things that I do not know that I am going to say, if that makes any sense.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 11:57:00 AM

    for a special lady, sister, friend. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 10:15:00 AM

    Fabulous poem, Carolyn, and a very dedication to Dane Ann. Thanks for sharing, thank you for your support and friendship. All the best to you. Caroline.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 9:15:00 AM

    Very nice Carolyn...Enjoyable...Good luck in the contest...God Bless....Taz

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 8:41:00 AM

    This is a beautiful tribute to your friends Carolyn and done so lovingly and wonderfully well! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Hope you have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 10:43:00 PM

    wow, this one is awesome for Dan Ann! I bet she loves it! And thanks for the win. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 9:45:00 PM

    Very inspired tribute to our talented poet and human being, Dane Ann. Good luck in the contest with "Jeanette" , dear Carolyn. :) Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 9:36:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest. A fine tribute to Dane Ann

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:42:00 PM

    This is a very touching write, Carolyn. I am honored that you thought me deserving of this special star. Smiling Big! Dane Ann

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:35:00 PM

    soup mail for you and dane

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:33:00 PM

    Interesting write that should do well in the contest...Also great tribute to Dane Ann....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and for lettting me know about my placement in the contest...I know with all the excellent work on here that it is hard to choose the ones that place in the contest.. Sara

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