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Inspired

Call it my place of inspiration
But don't call it the source
Because my muse doesn't bring *tranquility
Instead the confusion of an unstoppable force

Her *dulcet laugh leads me through a maze
To her simplistic place of *bliss
And only there does she radiate true *splendor
That indoors I surely miss

In her garden, sanctuary-- her own
She harmoniously hums, *lilting melodies
Because she feels no need to try for *eloquence
Among the unexpectant flowers and leaves

It is there in the garden of rosemary and *lavender
That the wind begins *wafting *fragrant scents towards me
And intimidating thoughts surround as it *whispers in my ear
"You're in love with that young lady"


Written March 10, 2010 for the Word Warrior Challenge

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  1. Date: 5/2/2010 9:34:00 PM

    this write is very awesome, nicely done ,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 9:50:00 AM

    Hey, congrats on "Inspired" I personally think it should have placed better than 10th.. But hey, it's all fun and you place and the contest was a challenge! ...Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 5:14:00 AM

    Nice poem Congrats on your win Destiny

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 2:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Destiny. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 8:53:00 PM

    Destiny, congratulations on your win with this romantic piece. I enjoyed reading it. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 10:15:00 AM

    Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 8:07:00 AM

    Congrats Destiny on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and use of her beautiful words...luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 7:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with your weave of words. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 1:16:00 AM

    Congratulations with your win in my contest, Destiny. You did very well with the words! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/13/2010 3:54:00 PM

    there are those pesty words again. john

  1. Date: 4/12/2010 6:12:00 PM

    different ideas with these words--good job!!

  1. Date: 4/12/2010 3:26:00 PM

    Thanks for your kind comment on my poetry today, Destiny. You have created a jem...I love the rhytm and the lovely words; and looks like a winner to me! Good luck in the contest. Kindest Regards, Andrew.