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DANCE

yo' shining tush is a !bliss!

the minty !fragrant! of yo' kiss!

that soft !whisper! through yo' lips!

!!!!! !!!! !!!!!

the !lilting! swift of yo' hips!

that !dulcet! cello is a hit!

the !splendor! blue in yo' eyes makes me quit!

!!! !!! !!!!

i try to run but the !wafting! scent of yo' hair makes me drift!

yo' words are of !eloquence! while mine does not fit!

that !lavender! tuxedo matches my daughters tiny pink-ish mits!

!!! !!! !!!!

if that ain't the life-kit!

then i dont know if !tranquility! is it!

!!! !!!! !!!!



WORD WARRIOR CHALLENGE: BEAUTIFUL WORDS  
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich  ?









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  1. Date: 4/19/2010 10:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placing in Andrea's Contest, Buffy! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 5:06:00 AM

    Good job Buffy!!! Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 2:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Buffy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 8:29:00 PM

    This was delightful Buffy. Congratulations on your win in Andrea's first contest. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 10:03:00 AM

    Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 1:08:00 AM

    Buffy, congratulations with your 7th place in the first concert I have sponsored as a member here. I found your poem to be the most original of all the ones I read! A fun read! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 10:31:00 AM

    lol.good luck.(: -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 4:27:00 AM

    Enjoyed this write...Very descriptive and expressive...I don't know about that first line though...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...An angel is assigned to each person who is to come to Salvation at the moment of their conception...This angel is to be their protector, guide, and help at all times..Sara

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 8:05:00 PM

    SOME I USEED WORD DEF.!!my daughter is a newborn, Miley's birth!! March 28,2010!! BUFFY FOOK!!!!MY NEW KIDDIE MAKES ME WANNA GET IN A CONTEST AND GET SILLAA!! YAYY!! SHE IN DA HOSPITAL.CAESAR AND ME GET HER IN TWO DAYS, HE PROBABLY WILL DO BETTER THAN ME, AT FIRST, JUST CAUSE I AM STILL IN PAIN AFTER HER BIRTH!!THEN A FEW WEEKS LATERRZ MOMMIEZ TAKIN OVER!HAHAZ