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The new kid

THE NEW KID.

I hope I will be welcomed here.
         I am 15.  (((((((   < ---not 15 anymore 17 …
I hear all ages are permitted
My mother told me to do something different 
With my life. 
Here I am. 
Hope to survive 
I will try hard to use my brain another way.
My poetry will not be outstanding.
Maybe not even read. 
Till than I hope to make new friends

 Pease and love to all

      Phil J.

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  1. Date: 10/22/2010 9:34:00 AM

    Im 17, and from that first one i read, your really not a bad writer...if you dont mind me asking, what ways did you use your mind before? its iight if thats too personal a question. Im just a curious lil girl lol peace B boy

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 8:35:00 AM

    Welcome Baby Boy! What a whimsical poem here. Enjoy!

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 1:09:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup BB, I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 6:15:00 PM

    hey, I'm only 14 so i too hope all ages are welcomed lol. I think you'll like it on here,it's my exscape. *Michaela

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 6:13:00 PM

    hey, I'm only 14 so i too hope all ages are welcomed lol. I think you'll like it on here,it my exscape. *Michaela

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 11:48:00 AM

    Welcome, baby boy, kind of cool name! As you can see, already you have many admirers! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:44:00 AM

    Welcome BB. From BILLYtheKidster not P D.

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 8:03:00 AM

    i think i know who dis is... is it who i think it is

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 2:20:00 AM

    Hi Baby Boy, with poetry, it is the reader who judges, BUT it is not to say they are right! I started writing 2 months ago and have entered a no. of contests. The more you write, the more inspiration will flow. The poets on the soup are VERY encouraging, they, we will help as much as we can. Poetry is unique, in all forms. Welcome

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 12:20:00 AM

    Welcome and have fun writing I wish you all the best in the future,,you have come to a place that is warm and caring and also filled with some awsome talent for sure,,just like you,,,,,Blessings..cecil

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 5:37:00 PM

    Welcome to our corner. I am sure we will enjoy reading your poetry. Just follow the rules and you will be okay. Your mother sounds like a wise woman. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 11:23:00 AM

    Whas up chulo, thank you for your comment (: and welcome, to whats become my home. Im 16, and yes, all ages are permitted. And Ill deff read every one of your poems and help you on anything if youd like ^^...its weird, and dont take this the wrong way please, but i have a good feeling about you. My friends call me Rain. Peace.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 7:34:00 AM

    well, I believe you made the right choice to come to poetrysoup.you may grow in many ways, bigger than you think. you made a great choice.(: im only two years older.i hope you have a wonderful time here. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 4:30:00 AM

    Welcome Boy baby. I enjoyed you poem

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 8:40:00 PM

    well baby boy nice write and of course as one of the new kids on the block your poetry is of course welcomed keep writting your mom is right you can have fun and stay out of trouble here at the soup good luck faleshia

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 7:41:00 PM

    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Baby Boy ..its a Family of great poets and now u are one too... enjoy your stay with us and continue to share your creative writes..luv.. "Sweetheart

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 7:36:00 PM

    Well baby boy, welcome:)... nice introduction, hope you enjoy this site... and thanks a bunch for reading my writes... i'm only seventeen and i barely started writing... well trying lol, it's fun, anyways have fun!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 5:25:00 PM

    enjoyed your intro, keep sharing with us. Welcome to the soup!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 5:23:00 PM

    All ages are welcome here, Baby Boy, and it's great to have you on board. A 12-year-old girl posted a poem a few months ago and it received many wonderful comments. You'll find other teens here too and I'm glad you mom encouraged you to find a creative outlet. This is an excellent choice. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 4:48:00 PM

    I hope you enjoy your stay on the Soup, there is so much to write about, so many subjects, topics and themes. Its always a good idea to view and comment on as many people as possible. But always leave time for writing. It will give you inspiration, as they will learn from you >> James

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 4:22:00 PM

    hOPE YOU LIKE IT HERE !