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Can not fail

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Can not fail

Hot ash plumes sky high,
  Raging magma, violent heat-
    now glory erupts.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2010 7:58:00 PM

    Nice job on earth's wrath garth. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 9:40:00 AM

    Captured the wrath of nature wonderfully Gareth >> James

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 10:16:00 AM

    a really wonderful contrast in your haiku here, Gareth, very vivid too :)

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 5:29:00 AM

    What childlike delight in the perspective, almost what Wordsworth yearned for. One love

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 11:48:00 AM

    The vivid imagery works well in this poem. You've painted a picture with words. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 9:42:00 AM

    Very explosive write that I am reading this afternoon. Sara