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ROBOT

 Robot 

Tin-can man. 
Input, circuit, and overdrive.
Shadow of the future and the past.
Movement hidden, you are not alive.
Programs burned and running fast.

What else can you do?
Wakening up every morning,
and not able to read the news.
Passing a breeze God gave you.
Barely feeling the I love you~s.
Your data has been set to self destruct!
Walking around all confused.
While your memory is set on stuck.

A heart not made to rust.
Hanging laundry out in the rain.
Lazy technician you can't trust.
Look what he's made out of you.

Ready to blow your thrust!

Compute- abort- system to self destroy.
Restoring the joy sucked out of you.
Input: input: information .
Wipe out the old, store in new.
Delete all files to recycle bin.

System reboot to life again.
With a new program that reads:
Feeling like a human once again.
       (This robot is on)
      .(self shut down!)
        
        P.D. was here!

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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 2:00:00 PM

    oh, woe. ...wow. ..some of my first post are funny..lol

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Linda This is a creative and imaginative write. You took the reader on a fantastic journey of this robots life. Nice job Hugs

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Dear Linda, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "ROBOT" I have not read even half of the first page of YOUR POETIC beginning and YOUR versatility is astounding. I would LOVE to sit down with YOU over coffee or if YOU drink Tea and roam through the many different pathways of YOUR mind. Superb Pen on this futuristic,past,today POEM. Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious comments on my work and YOUR uplifting SOUP Mails. SOUP MAIL REPLY I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Etrnal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 7:48:00 AM

    This is really brilliant PD, you are a in a class of your own, such intelligence wrote this wonder.. so with your beauty comes a brain, a very good one too....

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:13:00 PM

    If I could for once rebut wicked poem trying to find this one for while if we were all machines remindes me of the terminater movie wicked poem mate luv davidscott

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 5:10:00 AM

    pd, critical piece, very descriptive... What you are known for...you were there! Big congrats on your great piece being featured this week, please keeping carving creative castles with your passionate pen. Wishing you many more features. Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 9:46:00 AM

    Congrats on your feature this week P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 9:06:00 PM

    ooo! I enjoy logging on ,, and seeing that~i made a featured poem of the week.. thanks soup... p.d.

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 1:12:00 PM

    A possible self-identity poem - not you thought PD. Clever. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 4:26:00 PM

    Congrats PD on "ROBOT" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 6:22:00 PM

    Congrats PD my BFF on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a truly great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. your BFF forever for all the lives we live..luv..

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 4:22:00 PM

    Greetings P.D.: This poem ROCKS!!! I am a fan of Science Fiction (and fact), so I really connected with this. Peace 2 ya: Sheol

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 10:56:00 AM

    me again pd (ok I can't pull a Chris right now & go comment crazy like he has been doing here) :) nice analogy you put in here--hmm I think I have to set out some time to read your older works-- next time ok? this is a really cool poem -- see you around :) 5 mins to go...I am a slowpoke

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:04:00 PM

    P.D.--Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block?

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 6:05:00 PM

    like a synthetic soul with orgasm mode in overdrive

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 8:09:00 AM

    Just wanted to say that 'Robot' in Portugal is a traffic-light, hahaha! Sounded funny for me when I first heard it! Thanks for your always kind comments! Yes the peaks of the Andes a really a breathtaking view, especially out of a plabne!...Gert

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 8:26:00 PM

    love it!

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 6:21:00 PM

    that was truly amazing . if there was a 100 rating on this thing you would get it from me but since it can only go to 7 i guess that's all i can give ..

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 10:16:00 PM

    Soupmailed you back.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 4:49:00 PM

    I really like this. You hammered in what makes them unlike us. Sad isn't it? I am such a big fan of robots. Makes me miss the future. Patty

  1. Date: 5/5/2010 4:55:00 PM

    The bestest yet! oh silly one and I liked the layout on the page specially at the bottom. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 2:36:00 PM

    Your poem reads like it could be part of you; all natural and flowing from your head to the paper - gliding. Thank you.

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 1:04:00 PM

    i can dig this one.

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 4:14:00 PM

    A lot of imagination in this one. I like it. Charles Henderson

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 9:57:00 AM

    But the cylones evolve. Good read, wondered is it a robot or what people can turn into.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 6:36:00 PM

    Smart! A lighthearted view at the "being" of a Sci-Fi tin can. (PD, Please check your soup mail.)

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 4:55:00 PM

    A unique write PD. mechanically and humanly speaking. Cool poem. Robert

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 4:10:00 PM

    This sounds like my mom She always has alot to do . She thinks we do not appreciate her. I like this one very much.

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 10:28:00 AM

    Nice work PD, love the thought behind this...Raul

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 8:00:00 PM

    Cool write P.D. and enjoyable and creative theme and gret words in your lines.. I once had to enter a contest for how to build a spaceship on Soup and it won 4th place and was similar to this type of poem u have written ... so if there ever is a contest befitting this theme..please enter this one.. "Sweetheart" was here ..luv..

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