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The Pain.

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The Pain.

Sitting here listening 
to my house creek and crack.
Wondering if I'll ever get 
my train of thought back.

Oh yes, how could I forget. 
I was thinking of you.
I just can't shake this feeling.
I don't know what to do.

What's with life these days?
Nothing seems to go my way.
Everytime I see you,
My heart just wants to stay.

For every crack this house creeks,
Another memory is brought to mind
There's a missing piece of my heart,
that I just can't seem to find.

Everytime I see you,
tears come flooding to my eyes.
This feeling that I get,
I absolutely despise.

There's an overwhelming heartache,
That's been leaking through my pours.
But off in a far and distant place,
my love, my heart, they soar.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2010 6:17:00 PM
    U must be heartbroken. I don't think I can fell like this for someone. But I have been hurt . Or I let my self hurt. Well I am enjoying your poetry today.

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:35:00 PM
    Oh! I like this. The ending got to me. Nice write. :)