Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

Guilty Onlooker

One day i watched a housefly perish. 
A memory i'd never hold or cherish.
A soul escaped his writhing mass
magnified by looking glass.
I swore i'd seen its final breath
and knew i'd been its cause of death.

Insignificant i know God slap my wrist!
Oh lord i wish the fly swat missed.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 4/10/2010 2:10:00 PM

    This is very good ! One of the best poems here for a while! A lot of depth ! Thanks

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 12:31:00 PM

    Another very good one. Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 7:46:00 AM

    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight... enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..