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Destroyer -about a poet-

who is this devastator?

tears brought freely to my skies,
slipping drops learn to fly,
sliding, falling, down ivory,
to land apon gently smileing lips,

destruction comes with beauty,
painted lips in colored blood,
emeralds shinning mischievous glint,
waves of dark night hiding skin,

stare out to the oceans path,
horizons meet the lines that laugh,
colors meet, to blend perfection,
wondering. . .

see a face, see a stare,
do you know who lies behind it there?
can you see past the walls?
or for you, do they so suddenly fall. . .

claim to be a destroyer,
claim to be a critic,
thus far i see a truthful woman or man,
thus far, i see no tricks. . .

in my mind i create a face,
though through my eyes i see none,
who is this destroyer,
who understood my hurt and love?

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  1. Date: 4/23/2010 9:20:00 AM

    Still my favorite poem on the site, just checking to see if you have any new poems..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 4:50:00 PM

    the tittle drew me in . thank you for your comments . and the welcome. we will be friends . awesome poem you got here.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 1:12:00 PM

    This is one of my favorite.

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 4:15:00 PM

    This poem rocks.

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 4:00:00 PM

    Rain I find this real cool . I hope it was appreciated. I sure did love it.

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 7:20:00 PM

    I trully am amazed this is like a dedication to Zoro. I like it . A mystery U write so well . Ilove it. Thanks.

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 12:02:00 PM

    I can feel the sincerity in your words, Rain, and you have painted a compelling portrait of the "mystery" that is P.D. We can only create a face for him in our minds until he decides to become a premium member and post his bio with a picture! haha. I have gathered some clues about him as I bet you have too! YOu have a poetic soul! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 10:43:00 AM

    Pretty :) You're an amazing poet! Xoxo Always, Serenity

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 8:33:00 AM

    Lovely write. Thanks for your comments. Just done the 3rd round. Keep your beautify writting up

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 7:38:00 AM

    Rain Rain You are one cloud with beauty to share. I do hide behind a wall in life and in pen. I do not need tricks to make a friend. A poet I don't need to claim to be. I will tell you what I can never write words so beauty like yours . Hey alot of poems are good . Yours are unique and in good word form .I am a mischief. But that is what makes life fun . Sliding, falling ' down Ivory . Are magic words not everyone can do.Thank Rain.

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 7:20:00 AM

    I will have fun reading your poems .I just added you to my fav poet. Thank you for comment on mine and Gareth fun run.