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  1. Date: 12/10/2010 4:58:00 PM

    Your a maste at this topic! Lovely to read you again, hope all is well and that this is an old hurt? Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:23:00 PM

    Great title, great poem, great last two lines. GREAT win. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 1:01:00 PM

    Congrats Amaan on your super win in John's contest with this brilliant write and entry my friend.. enjoy a top spot win for a top notch poem .. from "Sweetheart" with luv..

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 11:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Amaan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 5:53:00 AM

    Not sure if just a topic or a true life happening..If so my sympathy goes out to you..Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 4:16:00 AM

    @Ram Mehta: Hey Dr. Ram Mehta, thanks a lot...and I think this was JOHN HECK'S contest and not Jared's....

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 1:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Jared, Syed

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 9:11:00 PM

    What a sad poem.Many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 9:48:00 AM

    "She packs her things, from corner, Rattling papers, things; and lost honor!" Reading it felt like being there.. Nice poem 'Syed' ..! :)

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 7:58:00 AM

    nice one, enjoyed the read, when sorrow is deep, one will find a way out sooner than one thinks,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 6:32:00 AM

    Such emotional depths conveyed in the scene so vividily potrayed, Syed. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 12:26:00 PM

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  1. Date: 3/25/2010 11:12:00 AM

    I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Syed. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 4:20:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Syed and lov your comment on Bill Cleator's blog about the "nasty" unkind poets who leave awful comments... good answer Syed..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 3:00:00 PM

    I really like the line lost voices of laughter echo. Thanks for your share. -Susan Mills