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the Sun is shining brightly.

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the Sun is shining brightly.

when the sun is about to rise above, one can see and admire the beauty of the light coming
out the sun which is like gold colour which is covered all whoever it comes on. all the
birds meet on the trees nearby singing with perfect cordination with each other, saluting
the sun, one can also feel the heat of the sun  on those who shining on them. some
passerbys drinking water to quinch their thirst because the heat is going very high as soon
the sun goes up little by little, and when the sun goes down in the evening, one can feel
the light heat and the light that seems to be very golden  yellowish on the fields and where it
passes leaving a spectular beauty looking at it, by going up little by little till it vanishes behind the sea for good

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  1. Date: 3/22/2010 5:28:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kenneth. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 1:49:00 AM

    Kenneth your write really captivated me - It was simply stunning to read - Thanks so much for sharing such a lovely write -:)

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 9:10:00 PM

    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..