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Haiku

too little, too few
short, blunt, minimal wording
understood askew

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  1. Date: 5/6/2010 4:43:00 AM
    thank you Mitch for you little comment that brought a smile to my face. Only for the reason I thought it was going to be hard. Once I started, it came to me quickly, both etheree,. And after I felt as if I needed a pat on the head. I kid you not,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 7:42:00 AM
    Nice write about the form. Except one hiaku so called expert told me no rhyming. Is she wrong. She also told me no hints in the tittle. This code is easy to break . Thats what makes it a good read. Do not worry I like it. Maybe you can correct. What I have been told. After you did win in that one contest. With your ---Murder- Haiku. The one about death flight in wings. Or something like that. I did not get no s.m. from you yet.

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 12:43:00 AM
    i agree, but i cant help writing them. They are such a tease, as you always want to write more!

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 8:01:00 PM
    I adore haiku!!!!!! condensed perfection! nice one! Mitch! and thanks for the congrats! jimbo

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 12:10:00 AM
    Yes, my feeling too on haiku, mitch. well, I am having QUITE the time here tonight. I typed up a blog in my files so I could bring it here and copy and paste it to a blog(otherwise, I could lose it all) and that thing saying server error keeps coming up. DRATS. Anyway, if I get it posted, I hope you will come read it. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 11:11:00 PM
    Cute one, Mitch. (Soupmail)

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 4:37:00 PM
    I often thought so! Thanks for reading me! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 8:49:00 AM
    Very cool write Mitch.. nice descritive words to explain what the form of Haiku is all about... I luv using it to write a lot of times too.. enjoyed..see u on PP..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 7:44:00 AM
    very nice haiku and thanks for your comment on my poor chicken poem faleshia

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 5:57:00 AM
    Some people can use the haiku form to convey an image, but rarely do we find one that makes a statement. Great observation; the form is confining for many of us. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 5:37:00 AM
    Got that right...Sara