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  1. Date: 3/28/2010 2:19:00 PM
    Quite a stunning poem of faith!... And an insightful view of everyday people and the 'real' world we live in...Beautiful flow too! - Tim

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 2:58:00 PM
    a very empowering view of God! excellent write! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 1:21:00 PM
    great write thanks for sharing somethings let in one out the other right of the ducks back have blessed day in the Lord Jesus

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 12:48:00 PM
    Creative title and also love the poetic it flowed like river. You should write books or something. Have a great weekend.:)

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 5:25:00 PM
    I am sure that Jesus would have a total different perspective on this place than you and I...He sees where we can't go...He knows what we don't know ....He knows about us what we won't admit to ourselves..He would give them love and understanding and right their lives if they wanted that..He is here in the hearts of people now...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 6:12:00 AM
    Jesus sees all of us, great and small, in our strongest and weakest moments. He is always there to help us "ascend the storm that bashes." This is a very compelling poem, Loopylu, and I hope you don't take Sylvia's unkind words to heart. She has been lashing out at people and you deserve better treatment. Love, Carolyn