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Without My Soup

*WITHOUT THE SOUP.......

                                                    >                             *                        *                      *
        *                                            >
                        *                             >                                    
                                                        >
                                                        >             *                        *        *               
                                                         v  
              *                           <         haiku's
                                    <                moon >>>>>   planet
                                 <                                          sonnet
                    planet   <                       *                                 >
                     free    <                                                             >            *
                    verse <                         #####                   *           >
                                                   # # SOUP ##                              >   lyric
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< <                  # # SUN # #  
                                                        #####             *                                                                                                                                                                                                                            >>>
                                      <           *        monoku's                                       >>> senryu  
        *                planet                            moon                                                   satellite 
                         quatrain
                                      >>>>      planet                >>>>     planet
                *                                  tanka                                 rhyme
                                                                                                   >>>


                  
.... MY POETRY, 
      MY HEART, 
       WILL
         BE 
          LOST 
            IN
             SPACE....
                                                                                                                                                                                                         

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  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:24:00 AM

    Wow! What a creative way to express your feelings about the Soup. Congrats on your 1st place win, Carrie! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:54:00 AM

    Well done many congrats on a big win xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 10:40:00 PM

    congrats Carrie on a great win for these true words about our site luv..

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 6:15:00 PM

    Clever rendition and happy win. congratulaitons Carie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 2:31:00 PM

    So creative!!! Nice win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest *Carrie*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:01:00 PM

    Carrie congratulations, this was stunningly clever, loved it..David

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 12:57:00 PM

    What a creation, enjoyed reading this and also had to read this again. Enjoy your day.

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 10:01:00 AM

    love it!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 11:52:00 AM

    what an explorer but don't forget the other galaxies!

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 8:33:00 PM

    woooooooooow! my friend this is a great visual to this verse....... and yes you are a poet, a great poet!

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 3:20:00 PM

    Very cool, Carrie!! Looks like fun! Have a great day! Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 1:11:00 PM

    Great design...Keep the creative type flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 10:56:00 AM

    Igive you the highest mark for the architecture as well as the poem. Sheesh, I feel so small now! Wow! Imagine the schematics that wewnt intgo this? Fine work and I'm sure it was! I'm glad that you liked the singing. I love those cartoons. They are the finest that this country has ever produced, bar none. ( Yes, I know about Tom and Jerry and Fleischer Brothers Popeye and Superman.) They are great as well. But these have to be the best. Thanks for your comment! Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 12:45:00 PM

    You can not imagine how happy I am that you liked my poem so much ... Although I have to clarify that your compliments make me blush, coming from a talented and prolific writer like you are, they are very appreciated and I thank you so much for them.... it's like winning the first prize in the most difficult contest! I had to modify the title of the poem, I hope you like it... Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 9:37:00 AM

    VERY VERY NICE LOVED IT AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS FALESHIA

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 3:38:00 AM

    Thank you for your welcome comment today Carrie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 3:02:00 AM

    Thank you for your welcome blog comment today Carrie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 6:39:00 AM

    This is an awesome design.. Good response.....:JP]

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 5:50:00 AM

    Hey! You are in orbit with this one. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 1:05:00 AM

    Very inventive Carrie.ongrats on your recent contest success.Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 12:22:00 AM

    Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 10:52:00 PM

    Carrie, did you see I did your tag game very quickly. I remembered a poem of mine that fit the theme and tweaked the last few lines so I could finish with I am a poet. Which makes it sound a bit odd I suppose, but oh well. . . . WE poets have to improvise a lot! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 3:41:00 PM

    Carrie, What an inventive clever poem! Your placing of words and your word placing deserve applause! Very astute observation from you.... a perfect poet! Mahalo, Connie

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 10:15:00 AM

    You named it all - the poet's universe is really an adventure to sail through, Carrie! Great Shape!!! Wishing you a nice week ahead and thank you for your comments...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 9:04:00 AM

    One word Darned Clever, oops thats two words >> och i was never good at English >> CLEVER >> awesome Carrie >> James

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 5:18:00 AM

    a unique n creative piece of shape poetry...watch out for those lyrical eclipses and metaphorical meteors! :-) cheers! P

  1. Date: 3/13/2010 9:56:00 PM

    Fantastico Carrie...........original indeed my friend:)Charma

  1. Date: 3/13/2010 6:37:00 PM

    Awesome job here Carrie !!!! Just fantastic...ya know, when I was a young one, I'd look up there in that black sky and see my poetic thoughts just sparkling...this write brought some fantastic mems back friend !!!!! james

  1. Date: 3/13/2010 5:20:00 PM

    oh, my gosh, carrie, I am SO SWAMPED. I have to put lots of time into everything I want to do well, and I am still trying to think up poems for some contests. can I take my time with this, dear? I can't possibly keep it going quickly!! By the way, I love how you mapped out this way of looking at all the kinds of poetry. Awesome! Luv, Andrea

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