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Without My Soup

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Without My Soup

*WITHOUT THE SOUP.......

                                                    >                             *                        *                      *
        *                                            >
                        *                             >                                    
                                                        >
                                                        >             *                        *        *               
                                                         v  
              *                           <         haiku's
                                    <                moon >>>>>   planet
                                 <                                          sonnet
                    planet   <                       *                                 >
                     free    <                                                             >            *
                    verse <                         #####                   *           >
                                                   # # SOUP ##                              >   lyric
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< <                  # # SUN # #  
                                                        #####             *                                                                                                                                                                                                                            >>>
                                      <           *        monoku's                                       >>> senryu  
        *                planet                            moon                                                   satellite 
                         quatrain
                                      >>>>      planet                >>>>     planet
                *                                  tanka                                 rhyme
                                                                                                   >>>


                  
.... MY POETRY, 
      MY HEART, 
       WILL
         BE 
          LOST 
            IN
             SPACE....
                                                                                                                                                                                                         

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  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:24:00 AM
    Wow! What a creative way to express your feelings about the Soup. Congrats on your 1st place win, Carrie! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:54:00 AM
    Well done many congrats on a big win xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 10:40:00 PM
    congrats Carrie on a great win for these true words about our site luv..

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 6:15:00 PM
    Clever rendition and happy win. congratulaitons Carie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 2:31:00 PM
    So creative!!! Nice win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest *Carrie*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Carrie congratulations, this was stunningly clever, loved it..David

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 12:57:00 PM
    What a creation, enjoyed reading this and also had to read this again. Enjoy your day.

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 10:01:00 AM
    love it!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 11:52:00 AM
    what an explorer but don't forget the other galaxies!

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 8:33:00 PM
    woooooooooow! my friend this is a great visual to this verse....... and yes you are a poet, a great poet!

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 3:20:00 PM
    Very cool, Carrie!! Looks like fun! Have a great day! Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 1:11:00 PM
    Great design...Keep the creative type flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 10:56:00 AM
    Igive you the highest mark for the architecture as well as the poem. Sheesh, I feel so small now! Wow! Imagine the schematics that wewnt intgo this? Fine work and I'm sure it was! I'm glad that you liked the singing. I love those cartoons. They are the finest that this country has ever produced, bar none. ( Yes, I know about Tom and Jerry and Fleischer Brothers Popeye and Superman.) They are great as well. But these have to be the best. Thanks for your comment! Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 12:45:00 PM
    You can not imagine how happy I am that you liked my poem so much ... Although I have to clarify that your compliments make me blush, coming from a talented and prolific writer like you are, they are very appreciated and I thank you so much for them.... it's like winning the first prize in the most difficult contest! I had to modify the title of the poem, I hope you like it... Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 9:37:00 AM
    VERY VERY NICE LOVED IT AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS FALESHIA

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 3:38:00 AM
    Thank you for your welcome comment today Carrie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 3:02:00 AM
    Thank you for your welcome blog comment today Carrie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 6:39:00 AM
    This is an awesome design.. Good response.....:JP]

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 5:50:00 AM
    Hey! You are in orbit with this one. Love, daver

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