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I see you

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I see you

I see you in 
fresh white snow
In the morning dew
In an ocean blue
On a mountain top
In an eagles flight
Your brothers eyes
And his little cries
I feel you in 
The softness of 
Your sisters skin
My heart within
I hear you when
My heart beats fast
A choir sings
A school bell rings
My mind keeps you
Tucked away
In a secret place
Your little face
I see sometimes
As I drift off
Me holding you
As I would do
If you were here
And I could be
A father to 
Not two, but three





 

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  1. Date: 3/18/2010 6:59:00 PM
    i havent lost a child but i know what it feels like to lose a loved one. i lost my only sibling, matthew last year and it still dont seem like he can be gone. he was only 40. im so sorry to hear of your loss your soup friend jodie

  1. Date: 3/12/2010 3:04:00 AM
    Know the feelings of a lost child, this one touched my heart. Not an easy thing to do. Excellent write gave it the highest rating I could.