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Vein of Life


Full river flowing into the open bay. 
Standing on a stone bridge. 
On a morning day. 

Levy’s are built to hold water in. 
To stop the cycle of, 
Embankment water erosion. 

A main flowing, vein of life. 
Keeps our world fresh,  and all things alive..

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  1. Date: 4/2/2010 2:31:00 PM

    What an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Nice use of imagery. Happy Easter! Karen

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 12:31:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jack. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 11:43:00 AM

    Why yes, they are very much like veins of life. Good analogy, Jack. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 11:28:00 AM

    I enjoyed that, thanks