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Down The Edge

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Down The Edge

Down The Edge


Monday, join work force
Tuesday, feel the prime
Wednesday, get worn
Thursday in wrangle
Friday, take a leave

Saturday fun
Up to midnight
Visit old friends
Go to downtown

For each day
Prisoner
Of worldly

Forget
Someone

God

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  1. Date: 3/27/2010 7:32:00 PM
    great write my friend,keep it up!Amen!

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 11:11:00 PM
    wow, this packs a powerful statement, VERY good, Noel! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 1:13:00 AM
    This is a wonderful reminder and clever idea for a diminished hexaverse--thank you for the reminder, Noel :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 7:05:00 PM
    Surely it is, Noel. A diminished Hexaverse. Awesome job! GAPE, Moses

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 4:05:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Noel. Thank you forall your kind comments. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 2:04:00 PM
    I think many do. I don't know where I would be without my faith. The ending packs a punch in this poem. Great way to share your message. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 6:02:00 AM
    Excellent Noel..a beautiful breakdown of the week and the foundation of it all GOD.. thankxxx for this wonderful poem today..and for your special comments on my poetry always.. luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 5:13:00 AM
    great poem, you have a poetic sounding name, your parents are smart.

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 3:36:00 AM
    This is a challenging verse form, Noel, but you make a profound statement. Was not expecting the last three lines...perhaps I, too, was forgetting "Someone." Awesome! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 10:55:00 PM
    Interesting write. Yes, God should be part of everyday of our life, not just on Sunday. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.