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Icy Carpet

27 February 2010

Icy Carpet
By: Noel N. Villarosa


Frozen waterfall
Weaving naked rocky hills
Roots grappled firmly

5th Place to Raul Moreno's Icy Cascade Contest: 3/7/2010

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    bill frew
    Date: 3/24/2010 5:06:00 PM
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    great write!thanks
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 3/13/2010 3:03:00 PM
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    Dear Noel, Beautiful Imagery gripping the reader Superb Write I see YOU have Great POETIC insight as YOUR First Comment to my POEM "Winter's Quilt" "I am sure this is a Winner" Spread YOUR POETIC Talent Throughout the SOUP Help us become better POETS as YOU YOURSELF Are YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 3/7/2010 12:02:00 PM
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    Congratulations Noel, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/4/2010 1:37:00 PM
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    Great writing! congratulations!!
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    Thomas Kurdyla
    Date: 3/4/2010 9:46:00 AM
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    Noel, I love this one! Could be Basho himself! Congrats! Tom

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    john freeman
    Date: 3/4/2010 9:45:00 AM
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    Congratulations on #5 Noel. Agape, Moses
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    Caroline Cécile Delacroix
    Date: 3/3/2010 9:38:00 PM
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    So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
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    Marty Owens
    Date: 3/3/2010 7:34:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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    Robert A. Dufresne
    Date: 3/3/2010 5:06:00 PM
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    congratulations on your win Noel!
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 3/3/2010 11:56:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Noel with this wonderful haiku. Your imagery was breathtaking. Blessings, Connie
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    James Fraser
    Date: 3/3/2010 11:29:00 AM
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    Noel, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James
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    Date: 3/3/2010 9:41:00 AM
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    Just stopping by to add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 3/3/2010 8:49:00 AM
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    A great, descriptive haiku. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 3/3/2010 7:26:00 AM
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    Very nice, Noel! I like the second line. Congratulations! Ruben.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/3/2010 5:28:00 AM
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    Congrats Noel on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy with your beautiful description of the photo ... enjoy this special victory..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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    Deirdre Omaidin
    Date: 3/3/2010 3:20:00 AM
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    Liked this one from the first time I read it. Many congratulations Déirdre
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/3/2010 3:18:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Noel. I can see your words in this picture. Love,Carol
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/3/2010 1:37:00 AM
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    Noel, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 3/2/2010 5:14:00 AM
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    enjoyed reading today!
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 3/1/2010 4:35:00 AM
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    Dear Noel, Congratulations on this most Amazing Haiku I believe I'll see YOU in the Winner's Circle If I may make a suggestion I think YOU should not put YOUR Name above YOUR POEMS that YOU enter in any Contest If it is a Blind Judging YOUR POEM would be disqualified YOU are a Very Good POET YOUR words are YOU - YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG --PS Sorry I haven't talk as of late MY Bad

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    Deirdre Omaidin
    Date: 2/27/2010 3:55:00 PM
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    This is very well put together, very pretty picture captured here. Déirdre Ó Maidín
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    Date: 2/27/2010 8:27:00 AM
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    Interesting take on the picute. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/27/2010 5:18:00 AM
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    I loved this --original..Charma


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