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THE GILPY GIRL IN OUR SOIREE

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THE GILPY GIRL IN OUR SOIREE

The wren hour drool within that 
very day, When we were taken 
on a forage trip, Beyond the 
karfanchan dangling viaduct,  In 
our own vertigo, And was coll by 
the alien sun of a day,
We passed-by, As enamor was 
with her, Many was about, I 
choose aftermath, As for aeon of 
a time, Yes it was such a 
wonderful voyeur, Had wish it 
lingers us far too off, I puff 
vrouw through my wife beak 
nose, Their ears, eyes stand-out 
like Coco-yam leaf, whilst  her 
frescata inhold my once 
beholden self , Some  whisker 
pups prance  across My vrouw, 
Wanton in their 
Omnishamblings, like a dumb 
duck, Meanwhile like sorts of the 
sky high, Behind their mounting 
shack, And her scamps out 
wrung the furthest spot, As we 
bore off a bit pointing yet, Felt 
we are on the hoof side.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2010 10:15:00 AM
    congratulations, I see from below that this poem was featured. This seems to use a dialect in the telling of the story. Interesting! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 6:01:00 AM
    Congrats on having your poem featured. I have had poems featured and it is a Awesome feeling. So enjoy it and keep writing. Rhonda Hero

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 11:21:00 AM
    Congrats Kelechi, on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. you are a Nigerian, I will try to look up your other postings. nice to have you here. trying to know how long you have been here. i will soupmail you if necessary. Love, always Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 5:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kelechi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 6:42:00 AM
    Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 9:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Kelechi. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 2:46:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 11:25:00 AM
    Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishin you all the best in the finals You are great.! love Leke

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 1:15:00 PM
    Interesting write...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 6:18:00 AM
    Great piece! Congratulations on being featured this week. GBU. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 3:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Kelechi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 8:53:00 AM
    i thank each and every person in this great house for your kindness and encouragement, GOD Bless

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 6:57:00 AM
    Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 5:16:00 PM
    Interesting use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you the best with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 1:58:00 PM
    Kelechi, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 2:20:00 PM
    surreal? like a journey through wonderland...many alien words...I wish I understood it better. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 7:09:00 AM
    very interesting write

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 11:51:00 AM
    thank you very well i never knew these could be so cogent.

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 7:56:00 AM
    Great..... Nicely written my friend....:JP]