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Laura Mckenzie
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Water hibernation
Placid and frigid Clad shrouded stones of splendor In a winter bath
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/7/2010 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Laura, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann (Please call me I lost your number)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/4/2010 1:53:00 PM
Great job in the contest and congratulations, Laura!
john freeman
Date: 3/4/2010 10:06:00 AM
A nice honor mentioned Laura. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
Marty Owens
Date: 3/4/2010 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 3/3/2010 9:52:00 PM
So very nice Haiku! Laura! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
iolanda Scripca
Date: 3/3/2010 7:56:00 PM
Placid and frigid - I like the two words put together in the beginning of your Haiku. Cool. :) Thanks for your comment too. Love, Iolanda
Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 3/3/2010 5:31:00 PM
love the way this Haiku rolls off the tongue, Laura. congrats on your placement in this contest!
Ruben O.
Date: 3/3/2010 2:31:00 PM
Nice, very nice Haiku, Laura! Congratulations! Ruben.
Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/3/2010 12:38:00 PM
Laura, Wow, I would have graded your outstanding haiku at the top, especially with your last line. Congratulations in being in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
James Fraser
Date: 3/3/2010 11:36:00 AM
Laura, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James
Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2010 10:27:00 AM
Great winter Haiku. I can feel the shivers. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Joyce Johnson
Date: 3/3/2010 9:02:00 AM
Really pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 3/3/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congrats Laura on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a beautiful Haiku for a lovely poetess.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/3/2010 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Laura. Love,Carol
Raul Moreno
Date: 3/3/2010 1:48:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/28/2010 6:32:00 AM
This one is good! Is it for Raul's contest? Some people, like you, can come up with some beautiful words to describe beautiful images. Nice! Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann (soup mail)
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/25/2010 9:50:00 AM
I wish you the best in Raul's contest Laura. Have a wonderful day my friend. Love, Carol
Ruben O.
Date: 2/24/2010 7:41:00 PM
I too used hibernation in my haiku!!! : ) Very well written haiku, Laura. Good luck in his Contest. Ruben.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/24/2010 7:25:00 PM
Laura, I hope you place high with this little beauty!! LUv, andrea
Carrie Richards
Date: 2/24/2010 5:55:00 PM
Oh I love that last line especially!! Nicely done, Laura!! Love, Carrie
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 2/24/2010 4:26:00 PM
Luv this one Laura.. if your entry for the new contest.. good luck... a great descriptive Haiku ..vivid and visual.. I posted a blog on poetry today if u care to comment.. thankxxx...luv..Linda-Marie..
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/24/2010 3:57:00 PM
Quite a vivid image, Laura. I like the idea of the stones "sleeping in winter's bath." Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
