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The Girl With Everything

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The Girl With Everything

The girl with everything
is what I wanna be,
and I'd give anything 
to make her me.
face so beautiful,
hair so right,
my dreams are shattered.
She's the star 
that shines bright.
The perfect polish 
on her nails,
I'd rather be her
than anyone else.
Everyone knows she's coming
but the scent of 
her signature perfume,
you feel an envious vibe
whenever she enters
the room.
She can have 
any guys she wants,
and she's got 
the perfect body.
People think
she's nice and sweet 
and the guys think
she's such a hottie.
I'd give anything 
to make her me,
the girl with everything
is all I wanna be

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  1. Date: 2/24/2010 10:42:00 AM

    You gotta think how empty this girl feels inside, everyone acts like her friend, but no one knows her on the inside, she hides who she really is behind her pretty face, worried that so easily someone could take her place, shes empty and cold sometimes, and she doesnt know how to survive, trying just to be, who everyone wants her to be, afraid to just be real, wishing inside that someone else could be she...awesome poem hun, check out the book 18 minutes.

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 10:57:00 AM

    Nice. Strive of perfection...to bad no one except Jesus and God are! But actually we are perfect to Them so we don't need all this eartly beauty and superficial garbage!