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YOU



When I first saw you
I liked you- A LOT.
You were indeed my
only thought
that laid restless on 
my mind.
I couldn't blink an eye
too miss the second
of the sight of you.


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  1. Date: 3/4/2010 7:51:00 PM
    Good reflections

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 2:09:00 PM
    Very romantic I enjoyed reading your poem today..

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 6:19:00 PM
    It called smitten, dear Brittany, and you've expressed well in this short poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.