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Awaiting The Sun

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Awaiting The Sun

beyond distant hills
where the lake meets with the sky
I wait all alone

for Raul's Contest

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:05:00 PM
    Good evening Michael, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 6:57:00 AM
    I could almost feel that I am also there...waiting for the sun on my own--thanks for sharing this, Michael...

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 5:17:00 PM
    Very nice Haiku...enjoyed....good luck in the contest...Marty

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 2:22:00 PM
    What a beauty, Hope the sun shines bright on you and yours..Charma

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 1:42:00 PM
    Michael, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul