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Haiku # 35 .

Dawn  light  says  hello

Big  Hi , Mister Mountain  Top

Still  waters  copy  .




Inspired by Raul's  Sunlight  haiku contest .

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/23/2010 8:52:00 AM
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    Much of a rainy day where I am at, enjoyed your Haiku..p.d.
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    Wilfredo Derequito
    Date: 3/9/2010 1:55:00 AM
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    And the man is still at 35, a long way to go till 69.
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    farah chamma
    Date: 3/4/2010 12:25:00 AM
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    This Haiku is somehow cute. I like this one =) Farah
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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 2/18/2010 4:29:00 AM
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    Congratulations Sean, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest. Again, your delightful style and humor peek out from your words. I love this one! You are definitely a winner! Smiles, Dane Ann
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 2/15/2010 8:23:00 PM
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    I love this, Sean! My congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey
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    Brandee Augustus
    Date: 2/15/2010 12:59:00 PM
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    I like the first line of your haiku. I think it's a great way to describe morning light. Congratulations on your win.
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 2/14/2010 12:41:00 PM
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    congrats on the win!! love it!
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 2/14/2010 8:35:00 AM
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    Too much pasta for lunch by England Sean,a bad hair day in Paris,and the Scots blew/ threw it in a sin bin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Off to hear Jonno'a comments.

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/14/2010 1:17:00 AM
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    yes, this IS a cute way to express that picture, Sean. If you wanna check out the car that bears my name Andie 55 on her license plate, I finally got my first blog and pictures up!! LUv, Andrea
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    Date: 2/13/2010 8:14:00 AM
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    Enjoyed the humor in your poem the first time I read it. Glad to see it in the winners circle for Raul's contest. Keep that humor shining!!! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 2/13/2010 6:55:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Sean. Love, Carol
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 2/13/2010 5:51:00 AM
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    Congrats Sean on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku #35 to describe the photo.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 2/13/2010 4:57:00 AM
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    Sean, This haiku has your charming personality written into it and I see why it was a winner! Congratulations. Connie
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 2/13/2010 1:00:00 AM
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    Cobgrats on your succees Sean.Maybe a double green today?Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/12/2010 11:29:00 PM
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    One of the most beautiful Haikus ever,Congratulations Sean:) Charma
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 2/12/2010 10:27:00 PM
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    Sean, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

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    Date: 2/12/2010 7:20:00 PM
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    Nice use of personification for an creative view. I can always count on you for a touch of humor to brighten my day. Keep on writing!!!!!!! Good luck in the contest. Karen
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 2/12/2010 1:33:00 PM
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    different approach, I like it!!
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    Kim Hilliker
    Date: 2/12/2010 1:30:00 PM
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    Nicely written Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
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    David Byrne
    Date: 2/12/2010 4:54:00 AM
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    Love the last line.....clever!


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