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The Sun

Slowly the sun creeps
Over the mountain top peeks
Sees itself and runs

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  1. Date: 2/23/2010 8:10:00 PM

    You have me smiling with this one. Got a chuckle out of it too. Nice use of personification for an enjoyable poem. Thank you for your kind comment on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 5:55:00 PM

    I love your Haiku...Love the sun seeing itself and running...lol...Enjoyed reading...Marty

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 5:53:00 PM

    Oh, this is precious, Laura, and thanks for your remark on my spring song. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 12:31:00 AM

    Beautiful write. Lovely small Poem with the wonderful word selection. Sun sees itself and runs. Excellent. Best wishes and love Ravindra.......Laura S