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Can't Let Go

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Can't Let Go

I though your love was forever mine
But Sunday night the clock stuck nine
Your number came up on my phone 
Remember when you said you’d never leave me alone
It’s starting to rain
I can’t take all this pain
Do you remember our first kiss 
I can clearly remember this
I hope that you know
That I can’t let you go
I can’t let go of you 
And I really don’t know what to do
You can’t walk away
No, not today
I won’t let go of you
I don’t care what I have to do
I need you more than ever now
I know we’re both thinking how
Don’t tell me that you love me
Because you can’t even see
What you had
But now, isn’t it just too bad
You don’t even know how
But I’m gone and it’s over now

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  1. Date: 2/19/2010 5:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 11:14:00 AM
    MaryAnn I feel your words so well done! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 4:03:00 PM
    enjoyed, congrats on the featured poem, much sucess to you!

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 8:11:00 AM
    Mary, Congratulations on your poem feature this week. Sincere, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 12:50:00 PM
    Mary, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 6:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mary. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 11:20:00 AM
    Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 8:14:00 AM
    Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend. Great Write

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 9:40:00 AM
    this is a sad poem but good and i think the reason i liked it so much is cause of the end. =)