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These are just some random thoughts 
that I guess I still have 
of you, of us, of me, of we.

How you use to call me
out of the blue saying, 
you just needed your daily fix
of me.

What happened to the times when 
we just couldn't get enough of each other 
and being apart only justified 
how much we longed to be together?

"If you had a choice between 
beauty or brains,
what would you choose?"

'I hate hypothetical questions.
Why can't I have both?'
I always wanted to be pretty
and I studied trying to be smart.

"How come you never call me?"
'Why does it matter,who calls whom
as long as we talk?

'You can call me whenever you want,
because I always want to talk to you.'

Remembering times we would 
be on the phone without talking,
just content to hear the other breathe. 

It use to compensate for us being apart 
yet it never did satisfy our loneliness.
Until we just got tired of hurting 
and saying the words  "I miss you."

if you stop saying it, then maybe
you would stop feeling it and then maybe 
it wouldn't hurt so much anymore.

How can one person's view of beauty
be another person's view of disgust?
Does the eye of the beholder differ that immensely, 
that your own beliefs, you no longer trust?

I guess I knew it was over when you would be sitting 
right next to me and I still felt all alone, 
neither of us knowing what to say.

I hate words at times, 
and the fact we need to speak 
to communicate.

These are just some random thoughts 
that I guess I still have 
of you, of us, of me, of we....

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  1. Date: 9/9/2010 5:54:00 PM
    His loss. Well written verse. This one came from the heart. Vince

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 1:10:00 PM
    I like your heartfelt poem! Thank you for your comment on my poem self-love! -Susan Mills

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 7:01:00 PM
    "I hate words at times, and the fact we need to speak to communicate." i like it(: i wish we could just write it down. sounds better. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 2:27:00 AM
    nice write... i think most of us some times have random thoughts of that lost but never dead love

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 3:20:00 PM
    I think you have captured the essence of "relationships may not last". It is a sad thing. The mourning process can last a long long time. I hope you can move on. Nice job!