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The Berries

A stalk of berries
Mem’ries of a playful child
Imagination that turns 
Poison into pleasure
Reality into fantasy
Berries.

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  1. Date: 2/7/2010 11:08:00 AM

    Interesting write that leaves the reader open to go in several directions. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 1:54:00 AM

    Laura love this piece - thanks for your comment on my work it is most appreciated and you are right - I am English - I come from a small city near the scottish border called Carlisle - it is a lovely place, full of history with a cathedral and a castle and many ties to the romans (worth googleing)- I'm sure you would love it. Love Janette