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  1. Date: 2/8/2010 5:45:00 AM
    See my poem "branches" sort of long but reminds me of this. Good write, my friend

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 5:22:00 PM
    It would be somewhat fesible if it were actually a poem. It needs structure and I would suggest giving it at least a blank verse. To me, it sounds like you are raving. And you contradict yourself