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iolanda Scripca
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Sadness Love
Origami dream Bonsai blossoms illusions Harakiri wish For Brian's Noun Haiku Contest
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/10/2013 11:13:00 AM
Good morning, IOLANDA;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA
daver austin
Date: 3/5/2013 10:20:00 AM
I liked this one so much, I looked up all the words. Congrats on the selection. daver
binibining P.iNk
Date: 2/4/2010 1:23:00 AM
never expected that last line! A clever haiku that progresses from dream to harakiri, wow..congrats onyour win with this Iolanda :)
HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 1/26/2010 6:10:00 AM
Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Honorable Mention In Brian's Noun Haiku Contest Seppuku is a very sad ritual Excellently Penned ALWAYS...HG
Elaine George
Date: 1/26/2010 3:59:00 AM
Absolutely beaituful Haiku, Iolanda. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. lainie
Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/25/2010 12:38:00 PM
Interesting write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/25/2010 2:42:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda, on placing in Brian’s Poetry of the Noun Haiku contest with these creative words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann
Margaret A Linton lassie
Date: 1/25/2010 1:06:00 AM
A pleasure to read. well done.....Margaret
Ruben O.
Date: 1/24/2010 5:31:00 PM
Congratulation on your wonderful win, Iolanda!! A deserved recognition. Ruben.
Linda Witt-King
Date: 1/24/2010 3:36:00 PM
Wow Iolanda! This is the first I've seen of your work. You've juxtaposed beauty and tragedy in so few words. Well done and congratulations on being mentioned. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
john freeman
Date: 1/23/2010 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your much deserved mention. Sincerely, Moses
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/23/2010 2:07:00 PM
oh , my goodness, I hadn't noticed you were on that winner's list too, Iolanda. HOW cool, my new friend won with her charming all noun haiku. You deserved it! andrea
Joyce Johnson
Date: 1/23/2010 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely winning poem. Joyce
Carrie Richards
Date: 1/23/2010 11:21:00 AM
There is such a melancholy feel to this wonderful haiku....a well deserving win in Brian's contest!! Congratulations, Iolanda!! (It is raining hard in No. California too!! Stay warm, my friend :) ~ Carrie
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 1/23/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Brian's contest... wonderful words in your Haiku and well deserved win... blessings with luv... Linda-Marie..
Brian Strand
Date: 1/23/2010 8:44:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'A RONDEL' is now open
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/22/2010 5:10:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening Iolanda. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/22/2010 8:53:00 AM
I agree with Carrie. A lovely image!
Carrie Richards
Date: 1/22/2010 7:55:00 AM
A lovely image! A lovely haiku!!
Brian Strand
Date: 1/21/2010 11:32:00 PM
Thank for for supporting my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian
Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 1/21/2010 9:24:00 PM
Interesting Haiku, very well written Iolanda! Good luck on the contest. I know, dear Iolanda, it s been raining here in L.A. county like cats and dogs as well. Keep dry. :) Best wishes, Caroline.
