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He Was Everything

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He Was Everything

He was everything.
He kissed away all of the pain.
He held her tight,
All through the night.
She never thought
that they would end.
He broke her heart,
he won't do it again.
He was the one
who drove her insane,
but he was worth every ounce
of her pain.
He was everything.

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  1. Date: 2/24/2010 9:40:00 AM

    wow now i really like this one! it was very very emotional and we all know what it feels to have our hearts broken. short, bittersweet and as usual very well written! Jo

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 9:43:00 PM

    I really like this one. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 1:07:00 PM

    Sad, well-written verse. Thanks for your comments left on my poem Serenity. ....Jimmy

  1. Date: 2/1/2010 1:50:00 PM

    Sounds like self-sacrificing love. Keep the pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 10:14:00 AM

    This is sad, but you will heal from that sharp puncture in your heart.You are my new friend!

  1. Date: 1/21/2010 12:53:00 PM

    I enjoyed this one too. A bittersweet story. Andrea

  1. Date: 1/21/2010 11:11:00 AM

    Nice write enjoyed this, depth of feeling Daniel