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sinner in my eyes (editted)

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sinner in my eyes (editted)

you're heartless... a cold hearted "witch"
you're a hex on me from the wicked, wicked witch
you're selfish...wanting what’s best for you
there's evil... a devil in you too

you're an angel; a demon in disguise
a saint; a sinner in my eyes
you're two faced, I see them both clear
you're lying… like I’m not standing right here

I ask myself... why I let me fall
like a rollercoaster ride
its over, you ask, is that all?
thanks to you... I’m dying inside

you're so shady...let me shed some light
it’s your fault... every single fight
your games are... so cussing cruel
you played me... I was the fool

you're laughing, while I am on my knees
inside, I’m waiting for your pleads
so I can knock that... grin from your face
and leave you... sitting in my place

you're heartless... a cold hearted "witch"
you're a hex on me from the wicked, wicked witch
you're selfish...wanting what’s best for you
there's evil... a devil in you too

you're an angel; a demon in disguise
a saint; a sinner in my eyes
you're two faced, I see them both clear
you're lying, like I’m not standing right here

you're gone now, so far from here
you'll never see me cry, I'll never shed a tear
you're a memory, an echo from the past
a lesson well learned, but it wont be the last

you were everything I want, but nothing like I thought
you can lie to the next guy, but this time you're caught
it didn’t last long...we had a good run
but I'll never forget... the things that you have done

you're heartless... a cold hearted "witch"
you're a hex on me from the wicked, wicked witch
you're selfish...wanting what’s best for you
there's evil... a devil in you too

you're an angel; a demon in disguise
a saint; a sinner in my eyes
you're two faced, I see them both clear
you're lying, like I’m not standing right here

you're heartless... a cold hearted "witch"
you're a hex on me from the wicked, wicked witch
you're selfish...wanting what’s best for you
there's evil... a devil in you too....you're heartless........
 

M.W.Patrick

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  1. Date: 5/19/2010 4:52:00 AM
    A good country song! welcome to soup! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 9:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Mike. Agape, Mopses

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 2:16:00 PM
    Hmm first of all congragulations on your featured poem dude. Second of all I know what you mean my cousin has a girl like that and I hate seeing him so torn up about her it makes me dislike her because he's a nice guy he raised since I was a little kid. What my oppinion is she doesn't deserve you haha. And that chick doesn't deserve my cousin either. ---sincerely, Nemo

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 4:05:00 AM
    Congratulations Mike, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 5:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mike. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 4:58:00 AM
    Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 12:16:00 PM
    Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 12:27:00 AM
    i cried. know a guy whos going through this. i'm in love with him...hes hung up on her....sounds just like that whole situation.

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 8:53:00 PM
    Sounds like she's a witch spelled with a "B" lol enjoyed the read...Marty

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 5:21:00 PM
    So you are saying...she's heartless? LOL great poem, Hope you are not still in pain.